Boom the start pistol went. I was running as fast as I could. My legs felt like jelly,my lungs were on fire. Could I last the distance? but look there was the finish line tape. Soon enough, I could hear thumps behind me. NO! Connor G was up and going on me! I just got there I did not think I could keep the lead but I just got there yes yes YES! but that noise it made me think I was in war.
But most of all I did my best
that sound at the end made me think I was at war. also medieval time it’s cool but scary at the same time it’s like i’m in another world I have a drink of water and keep thinking yes i've got a good description for it a ghost is following me thats a good one mum comes and picks me
up I get in the car and tell mum all about it THE END.
I liked it when you read this in the hub, Camden. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used all the deceptive words to describe how you felt in the moment. It paints a great picture in my head
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