Free Choice Writing:Camden

Free Choice Writing: Persuade, Entertain or Inform? Camden

I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas	Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation	Include simple, compound and complex sentences Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary	Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure	Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling	My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation	Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

Something though the air By Camden Bruce  

Once on a dark and windy night something didn’t feel right. The Atmosphere was more windy than normal. When I looked out the window I saw a flying saucer. I ran outside to see the wreckage of a ufo. This was bigger than I expected but the three grey aliens came out with

ray guns and weird looking hand cuffs. They said sorry wrong planet we come from mars. And going to the moon because there are aliens on the moon but can only be seen while you have a space suit on. But that’s for humans. We need to destroy them they are trying to destroy

earth. But now that we have crashed on earth we have no chance of getting away. Maybe we can work out something with president Obama mabe? Let's do it once we had it we had seen many scared people and went to the white house and said that we need parts for a spaceship for the greys and the greys said the earth is going to be destroyed. He said ok we need to get the best scientists to do this and the best engines for planes. Ten weeks later the ufo was as good as new and the greys walked into their ufo and started up the engines all three aliens said thanks and flew off. One year later the greys stopped the moon aliens.