Something though the air By Camden Bruce

                      Wellcome fellow Bloggers

     today I will be sharing my writing hope you like it

   from Camden Bruce
 

Free Choice Writing

Persuade, Entertain or Inform?

I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.

You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas	Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation	Include simple, compound and complex sentences Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary	Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure	Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling	My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation	Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

                     

                            Something though the air By CamdenBruce  

Once on a dark and windy night something didn’t feel right. The Atmosphere was more windy than normal. When I looked out the window I saw a flying saucer. I ran outside to see the wreckage of a ufo. This was bigger than I expected but the three grey aliens came out with ray guns and weird looking hand cuffs. They said sorry wrong planet we come from mars. And going to the moon because there are aliens on the moon but can only be seen while you have a space suit on. But that’s for humans. We need to destroy them they are trying to destroy earth. But now that we have crashed on earth we have no chance of getting away. Maybe we can work out something with president Obama mabe? Let's do it once we had it we had seen many scared people and went to the white house and said that we need parts for a spaceship for the greys and the greys said the earth is going to be destroyed. He said ok we need to get the best scientists to do this and the best engines for planes. Ten weeks later the ufo was as good as new and the greys walked into their ufo and started up the engines all three aliens said thanks and flew off. One year later the greys stopped the moon aliens.

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Matariki Reflection

My Matariki Reflection

Share what your favourite part of the day was and explain why (because).

My favourite part of the day was planting native trees.

Share a time you used a learning muscle. Describe how you used it.

I used the learning muscle managing distractions when Tyler was bugging me when I was chopping potatoes.

Describe your biggest challenge of the day.

My biggest challenge of the day was chopping potatoes.

Finish this sentence:

The best thing about Matariki is planting.

Write a sentence for each letter (PRIDE) about how you showed PRIDE on our Matariki Day.

Personal Best:when chopping potatoes

Respect and Responsibility:I helped eva with the potatoes

Integrity:when I accidentally dropped a potato  

Determination:planting

Enjoyment:in zumba

A photo of me on Matariki day during the cooking Workshop:

Free Choice Writing:Camden

Free Choice Writing: Persuade, Entertain or Inform? Camden

I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas	Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation	Include simple, compound and complex sentences Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary	Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure	Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling	My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation	Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

Something though the air By Camden Bruce  

Once on a dark and windy night something didn’t feel right. The Atmosphere was more windy than normal. When I looked out the window I saw a flying saucer. I ran outside to see the wreckage of a ufo. This was bigger than I expected but the three grey aliens came out with

ray guns and weird looking hand cuffs. They said sorry wrong planet we come from mars. And going to the moon because there are aliens on the moon but can only be seen while you have a space suit on. But that’s for humans. We need to destroy them they are trying to destroy

earth. But now that we have crashed on earth we have no chance of getting away. Maybe we can work out something with president Obama mabe? Let's do it once we had it we had seen many scared people and went to the white house and said that we need parts for a spaceship for the greys and the greys said the earth is going to be destroyed. He said ok we need to get the best scientists to do this and the best engines for planes. Ten weeks later the ufo was as good as new and the greys walked into their ufo and started up the engines all three aliens said thanks and flew off. One year later the greys stopped the moon aliens.